2024年11月写作报告

This month, I have updated 7 chapters of my novel, and for my readers. However, I found some issues in my writing. First and foremost, all my Chinese writings were based on Google Translate. What an irony! Additionally, when I was reading my novel, I found that my English writing was not detailed enough. For example, I should add more foreshadowing and more imagery in the first 5 chapters. Based on these consequences, I highly believe that I need to have some time to solve these issues in these months. I hope I can make some improvements in Chinese and English.

作者：我这个月就更这七章，第2和第3章还没有更好，此外这所有的7章我中文机翻有很大的问题，英文篇幅也有大问题，我争取这个月解决。今年我争取中英文都再上一个台阶。

About Honkai Impact, I will write about it in Season 3, since my writing ability was so bad. I guess I need more power to improve myself.

作者：至于崩坏同人文，我第三季在搞，要不然我自己都看不下去了。

At last, this message to Mrs.Mo. Wait for my coming.

罢了，不行，我感觉我表达不出来，我这语言真烂，我加上英语吧。

对了，鉴于审核问题，我只能分成中英双版本。之所以保留英文是为了将来更方便更改中文版。

龙明1：黑暗时代提示您：看后求收藏（同人小说网http://tongren.me），接着再看更方便。